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Day dreaming
Night dreaming
Not-quite-sleeping
Secret-keeping
Wrong yet true
Not a hint of clue

Hands touching
Grabbing, holding
Contact heating
Somethings molding
A blush, glance
Giggle, laugh

A boy, a girl
A kiss, a world
That fleeting moment
For atonement
Deciding passion
Our new fassion
Our all new
Preview

Canned elation
Simple bliss
No feeling on Earth
Is better than this
The air is warm
Your eyes are clear
I'd be happy forever
To have you near

Let me know
If I offend you
If you don't like this
Chaos factor
This, our all-new
Hidden captor
Not a complaint
Growing faint

Something falling
Waking, calling
I'm alone now
Once again
Of course I drempt
This kosher sin

But hopes and
Dreams
Blur at the
Seams
And just hearing
Your voice
I make my choice

I love 'us' as we are.
©2007-2009 ~ryu-son
:iconryu-son:

Author's Comments

I'm sorry if you watch me for scraps but I fixed this up and posed it in my gallery. Thanks!

I fell asleep in a ditch today. Daydreaming, I fell asleep. Had a dream, not dirty at all. Just a touch, a kiss. But yeah. Random. My .hack//SIGN OST is such a good muse. XD;;;

:heart:Ryu

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:iconbeatlesfreak:
Wow I love this! The flow is amazing and it goes so well, the words just roll off each other. Wonderful rhyming scheme. Very cute. :heart::)

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon
:iconryu-son:
Thank you so much! I was going for a good flow, and I'm so glad I got it right! :hug::heart:

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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconmcmuffinbumf:
This is very good! Excellence can always happen if you're in the right mood!

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Do you know the muffin man? Well, Now you do.
Admit it. You'd totally tap my avatar. People that have admitted:14 (yay double digits!)
~*~*~*~*
Go ahead...click my face ;)
:iconryu-son:
Yeah. Or if you're sleeping. XP

Thanks!

--
And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconburstchyld:
This is really good, I really love the flow of it.

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Look at the size of THAT Distraction!--N1NJ4
:iconmcmuffinbumf:
Or in a blanket!

--
Do you know the muffin man? Well, Now you do.
Admit it. You'd totally tap my avatar. People that have admitted:14 (yay double digits!)
~*~*~*~*
Go ahead...click my face ;)
:iconryu-son:
Or eating cherries!

--
And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconryu-son:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it! :heart::heart::heart:

--
And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconmcmuffinbumf:
OR BARN SWALLOWS!

--
Do you know the muffin man? Well, Now you do.
Admit it. You'd totally tap my avatar. People that have admitted:14 (yay double digits!)
~*~*~*~*
Go ahead...click my face ;)
:iconwatanukiseye:
.hack sign huh?

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You want a nickel? You want a penny? You wanna screw?

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