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Don't Fall, Don't Listen by ~ryu-son:iconryu-son:



Are you there?
Can you hear me?
Am I still here?
Am I breathing?

With the chorus
Of voices
Demanding
Your choices
Your will and
Your life
Dictating
Your strife
"You're alone"

Don't listen

Stand up and stare down
But don't make a sound
It's okay...
Okay...
I can never say the right thing
So maybe I'll just say
Okay...
It's okay...
Don't fall

Your today and your past
It seems nothing lasts
And your dreams are so far
No hold...
You have no hold...
And your hopes that are dead
While you lay in bed
Want to dance...
Just dance...

Just listen

Stand up and stare down
But don't make a sound
It's okay...
Okay...
I can never say the right thing
So maybe I'll just say
Okay...
It's okay...
Don't fall

Do you feel alone
Imprisoned by stone
Or sterile, white walls
Maybe echoing halls
Are you captured free
Blind though you can see
"Forever"

Don't listen.

Don't fall.
©2007-2009 ~ryu-son
:iconryu-son:

Author's Comments

Written at school.

I kinda like it. I'll move it to scraps in a few days unless someone says otherwise. XD

Please comment!
:heart:Ryu

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:iconkrensada:
Looks good.

--
I can see beauty where others see ugliness. That either makes me an artist, or a man of very poor taste. --Unknown
:iconbeatlesfreak:
I really like the ending, very well written:aww:

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"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all." - John Lennon
:iconryu-son:
Thank you so much! =D

--
And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconryu-son:
:giggle: I see a comment~

--
And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconsunnycat555:
Wow, that's great! Someone should seriously write some music for that...

--
Pointless Fact #9: People will think you're a terrorist if you wear a checkered scarf in school.
:iconflow-chan:
That's awesome...
But it's depressing, too. XD

--
Leader of ~Planet-Vegeta-Club
Come join!

+~*The Goblin Queen*~+
Ex-fan of Twilight. I have seen the light!

~ Flow-chan
:iconryu-son:
It's meant to be encouraging. o.o
I guess I fail at encouraging songs. XD

--
And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconryu-son:
Thanks! I have music in my head. XD;;;

--
And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
:iconflow-chan:
XD I dunno~ I think things that are happy are depressing sooo...

--
Leader of ~Planet-Vegeta-Club
Come join!

+~*The Goblin Queen*~+
Ex-fan of Twilight. I have seen the light!

~ Flow-chan

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