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I sit here in my room,
Chugging pink 7-up
That presumably went flat
Over an hour ago.
Making similes
And comparisons
That make emos
Look like poets
And here I am,
Staring into the colorful,
Mildly flavored, over-sugared
Apathetic, ooze
Making another
Lame, stupid
Analogy
My life as of late
And this over-satiated
Sugar water
Have more in common
Then I wish
It started after
The last day of school
The 21st of this
Hellish month
I watched as you
Walked away
The bottle got
Halfway-opened
Then it was left
Loosing a steady,
Small stream
Of it’s fizz.
It sat for what,
Three weeks?
Then, that morning back
It opened.
As I sat down
In the seat that I
No longer had to fight for
Didn’t have to push,
Pull, or race for...
I knew it was wrong
The now even seating
Frightens me with it’s
Absolute uniformity
No pulled up chair by the side,
No one sulking on the padded bench
And everyone seems
Not to notice this flaw
Halfway through the day
Someone closes the bottle
Scolding that it would spill
And conserving the last
Tiny bit of fizz
Then, when I finally got home,
Walked in the door,
I broke down
And opened the bottle myself
Releasing the last bit of CO2
Into the vast atmosphere
Contributing to hurricanes,
Volcanoes, sunspots,
Melting ice, exploding
Kittens and whatever else
That Gore asshole
Feels like guilt tripping
Us on this week
All of my CDs
Are either too depressing
Or too upbeat
So I turn down my speakers
Until the songs are just
An eerie murmur
Indistinguishable from
One-another
A strong jolt-like vibration
Sends my phone
Flying off the table
Onto the floor next to me
A simple name is scrawled
Across the light-up screen
Amaoury</i>
Shaking almost as much
As the device, itself
I answer
“Hello?”
I sit here in my room,
Chugging pink 7-up
That presumably went flat
Over an hour ago.
Making similes
And comparisons
That make emos
Look like poets
And here I am,
Staring into the colorful,
Mildly flavored, over-sugared
Apathetic, ooze
Making another
Lame, stupid
Analogy
My life as of late
And this over-satiated
Sugar water
Have more in common
Then I wish
It started after
The last day of school
The 21st of this
Hellish month
I watched as you
Walked away
The bottle got
Halfway-opened
Then it was left
Loosing a steady,
Small stream
Of it’s fizz.
It sat for what,
Three weeks?
Then, that morning back
It opened.
As I sat down
In the seat that I
No longer had to fight for
Didn’t have to push,
Pull, or race for...
I knew it was wrong
The now even seating
Frightens me with it’s
Absolute uniformity
No pulled up chair by the side,
No one sulking on the padded bench
And everyone seems
Not to notice this flaw
Halfway through the day
Someone closes the bottle
Scolding that it would spill
And conserving the last
Tiny bit of fizz
Then, when I finally got home,
Walked in the door,
I broke down
And opened the bottle myself
Releasing the last bit of CO2
Into the vast atmosphere
Contributing to hurricanes,
Volcanoes, sunspots,
Melting ice, exploding
Kittens and whatever else
That Gore asshole
Feels like guilt tripping
Us on this week
All of my CDs
Are either too depressing
Or too upbeat
So I turn down my speakers
Until the songs are just
An eerie murmur
Indistinguishable from
One-another
A strong jolt-like vibration
Sends my phone
Flying off the table
Onto the floor next to me
A simple name is scrawled
Across the light-up screen
Amaoury</i>
Shaking almost as much
As the device, itself
I answer
“Hello?”
Literature
Fairytale Mythology
my words are magic beans that grow into a stalk
so, follow where I lead, let's take a little walk
past wolves that ain't nothing but huff & puff
you're running with the big dogs now & I just called your bluff
my house is made of stone, while you're wearing grandma's clothes
I mastered poetry and reinvented prose
with flows that topple foes and rescue damsels in distress
my cupboard's never bare, my porridge passes every test
impressed? distressed? afraid you've met your match?
I burn quick like candlesticks; too nimble for you to catch
so sing, "hey diddle diddle, this cat don't play no fiddle
but he still make music so sweet
that
Literature
So You Wanna Be a Writer?
Many writers profess their desire to be novelists or poets, and sometimes even journalists, but very few--indeed, even those sitting with Creative Writing degrees, know what other options are out there for someone gifted with words. Your old Alma Mater wasn't lying when they said you could do "anything" with an English Literature degree, but they may have been leaving out much of the story.
For writers, especially those trying to break into the publishing business, the world is a daunting (and often depressing) place. Securing a literary agent is almost necessary in today's oversaturated market and, while many publishers are still looking
Literature
Poured Out
Like old cans
stripped of their labels,
naked tins of tomato soup
and cream corn,
their purpose lost
in anonymity,
I find myself
invisible.
Opened and emptied,
I roll through dark days
like blind alleys,
kicked by
tattered feet
wishing for shoes.
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If you're reading this before you read the emo-poem you need a cookie. XD
This was based on a dream... It was a very depressing dream...
This is personalized because that's how I wrote it... If you know who the person is DON'T SAY ANYTHING!!! D<
Especially you, Jessica. Because you know him. Knew him. Yeah. A little. You had one class with him... BUT STILL! You know what. You don't even have to read it. XD;;;
Otherwise, please comment, and critique is loved!
Ryu
This was based on a dream... It was a very depressing dream...
This is personalized because that's how I wrote it... If you know who the person is DON'T SAY ANYTHING!!! D<
Especially you, Jessica. Because you know him. Knew him. Yeah. A little. You had one class with him... BUT STILL! You know what. You don't even have to read it. XD;;;
Otherwise, please comment, and critique is loved!
Ryu
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oh wow, i love this!! i love your style of writing, and your word choice.
excellent work.
excellent work.